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©2003-2009 ~phoenixxash
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A collab with the very talented
It was one of this collab's I did not have think twice
Her poem is full of imagery , and surre·alism
the image of the woman came to me like dove
And here I have submitted to share and behold.

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:iconazriphale:
I most definately am impressed here and a wee bit jealous. Nice work!
:iconnoctambula:


Its a great combination.
I really like it.
:icon-henrique-:
I wasn't able to distinguish among two different styles, so they way you both melted this together is remarkable.

I'm not too fond of the lettering (kind of hard to read on full view), I have to say. But the piece itself is quite intriguing.

The 3rd stanza's transition is really great, seems to turn the mood to a more hopeful one... and the mentioning of laughter reminds me of every time I've laughed at danger or adversity, despite knowing it might be greater than I am.
:icon-blackscarling-:
I have to agree with hengrique on the font of the piece. A few times, when I was being drawn into the poem, it spit me back out because I had to go back and reread an above line.

Other than that, this is marvelous. I think you've captured something here, that some people can only dream of catching a glimpse of.
:icon-blackscarling-:
I have to agree with henrique on the font of the piece. A few times, when I was being drawn into the poem, it spit me back out because I had to go back and reread an above line.

Other than that, this is marvelous. I think you've captured something here, that some people can only dream of catching a glimpse of.

(I'm hoping this doesn't submit twice. If it does, sorry!)

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